2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

Education pays According to the data,it can be seen that,as the students growing up,the unemployment rate are coming down,while the median weekly earnings are rising.What can we learn about this result? During the recent years,people are pay more and more attention to the educations,it has been playing an important role in our day life.Students study harder and harder for a higher degree,in that case ,they can find a more enjoyable job,but in other aspect,it is also needs more education pays and make money later,so what's the point of study so long? As far as I concerned,money is necessary for us all,but the spirit is our true life,the knowledge can help us enjoy our life.