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Nowadays, more and more college students like to take many certificate test. Why are students so crazy for these test? Are these certificate for them very important? Some college students think that certificates are very important. Because certificates sign their effort in school. If they have english certificate, computer certificate or some other certificates, they will find a better job after they graduated. Employers tend to find job hunters like that. But others agure that if college students crazy for these certificate test, they will lose time to learn their own lesson. They say that some certificate tests are waste of time and money. In my opion, college students take some certificate tests is good. Because they have more lesure time in school, so they should learn more knowleage by themselves. To take a certificate is a good way to learn new knowleage. But no too crazy for it. They should do their duty first.
