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Nowadays, more and more college students like to take many certificate tests. Why are students so crazy for these tests? Are these certificates for them very important? Some college students think that certificates are very important. Because certificates sign their effort in school. If they have english certificate, computer certificate or some other certificates, they will find a better job after they graduated. Employers tend to find job hunters like that. But others agure that if college students crazy for these certificate test, they will lose time to learn their own lesson. They say that some certificate tests are waste of time and money. In my opinon, college students take some certificate tests is good. Because they have more leisure time in school, so they should learn more knowledge by themselves. To take a certificate is a good way to learn new knowledge. But do not too crazy for it. They should do their duty first.
