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I have met a new teacher this semester, his name is called Terry. Terry teaches us English gramma everday from 11 o'clock to 12 :15.sometimes, he started his lesson by asking us some questiones while another time he didn't.He knows a little bit of Japenes ,and I think he can write a few words.I've learn alot from him and I really enjoy it when he teaches the gramma.