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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mr.Wang, It was very kind of you to accord me this opportunity to work as an editor nonetheless,now I am very sorry to say that I have to quit my present job. The chief reason is that the job is not as challenging as I had expected.I have been required to do the jobs of checking and proofreading instead of accomplishing creative tasks such as inventing and formulating.In addition,the salary turns out to be lower than what I had anticipated. I am sure that my working experience here will benefit me in my future career.I do apologize for any inconvenience brought about by my resignation,and I wish you all the best. Best regards. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

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