文章在句法方面做的很棒,复杂句的比例可适当提高;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;请作者增加词汇丰富度,适当增加学术词汇的使用,拼写错误要努力避免;请注意分段。
the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication we can not deny that most of people becoming has little communication with each other.they are mamy reasons can lead to this. with the development of digital techonolg,we have becoming into the digital time,we can not live without it,which every one also can not to let it go.
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