小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.she is beautful girl,she's name is sarah.she better at piano and english very well.Our hang out at everyfriday,everytime i fecth her outing only,she did'nt fecth me,but anyway I like her so much something she like a kid,as action like kid,voice also lika a kid,she is so cute,she have a nike name,at school all people call her "meow" because she's voice also like a cat,we are friend forever!