2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；连词使用偏少。

what is the future of medicine we can not deny the fact that poor doctors-patients relationships has becoming an hot issue.as a graduate students with majoring clinical medicine,i wants to take some suggesstion. there is no better examples than the case that patients kill the doctor can prove it. what is the mean reason?firstly ,they can not communiation with each other well.