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托福独立写作模拟题:大学是一生中最重要的时光

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:30浏览次数:1261
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Read and think about the following statement:The college years are the best time in a person’s life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
题干讲解:
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示:
1、 大学里是学习可以谋生知识的最好时机。
2、 大学里是交朋友和发展亲和力的最佳时机。
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
评语:

采用了一些简单的从句;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

The college years are the best time in a person's life Many successful person always due to their college years,they think themslves be exchanged when they at that time. Because,at that time,we all are purity,we consent on how to study and how to go in futile.We do things go on with our planet. A lot of person give views that show they meet their lover a life.At college,we meet our co-oprater in bussiness.our best friends ware first chatting at college. In my opoin,I should celebret my college.I meet my lover,I do what I want,I think many my life in futile.

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