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采用了一些简单的从句；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；文章词汇表达不够丰富，在拼写方面也要继续努力；连词使用偏少。
The college years are the best time in a person's life Many successful person always due to their college years,they think themslves be exchanged when they at that time. Because,at that time,we all are purity,we consent on how to study and how to go in futile.We do things go on with our planet. A lot of person give views that show they meet their lover a life.At college,we meet our co-oprater in bussiness.our best friends ware first chatting at college. In my opoin,I should celebret my college.I meet my lover,I do what I want,I think many my life in futile.
