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2010年考研英语作文真题:文化火锅,既美味又营养

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:05浏览次数:9598
要求:
题目 看图作文:文化火锅,既美味又营养(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,if we look hard enough,we can observe tangibly that it describes the trend which the college students engage in part-time job from their freshman year to senior year.The percentage of freshmen of the university engaged in part-time job is approximately 66.77%,while the seniors is roughly 88.24%.It is apparent that the college students who engage in part-time job immensely increases while in universities. What accounts for the increase?From my perspective,we have no better way to appreciate the not uncommon phenomenon than by studying the following influential factors.In the first place,obviously,the change is closely related to the turning of students'attitude and outlook on education.They become aware that what really matters is the combination of theories and practice.In the second place,the change has a lot to do with the pressing employment situation. Approcaching graduation,they are actively occupied in part-time job in the hope that working experiences give themselves certain advantages over other in employment.In the third place,in the final analysis,income is a crucial factor contributing to the change. Small wonder,we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that it is as the society further develops that the trend is bound to continue in the forthcoming years.As far as I am concerned,it is a positive change and should be further stimulated in that part-time job experiences are not merely beneficial to students'development but also to the development of our society.

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