小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend is very beatitul and lovely,she hlep me a lot in my life.she has long hair and big eyes ,she name i s anna ,we are in some school,and she is my college ,she habbit is sleept , we are offer together go to school. she is my foviriate friend.