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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章词汇表达较丰富，但请加强单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
People live a better life with the developement of economy and society.We have cars,big houses,and much more things we never had.We can go everywhere we want.We should live happy.But more and more people feel less happiness compared with before.The quality of life is decreasing,specially in large cities. There are many reasons.The enviroment pollution is the first problem.Automobile exhaust make the air very dirty.We hardly see blue sky.Secondly,the healthy prblem.More and more people suffered with diseases such as canser,hypertension,diabetes mellitus and so many chronic diseases.People spend most of time in hospital,especially the olds.For the yong,they should cary more work pressure.They need money to buy house,car,and so on, to satisfay the needs of life. To solve these problems,we have a lot of work to do.First of all,we should develop green science and techology.Avoid to destory enviroment.Then,to live healthy life,we should have knowledge of health.Do some
