作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
There will be a long time during the summer vocation,do you not know what to do during the long time?do you want to do something meaningful?The students' union will organize a voluntary program in the summer vocation. We will go to the poor village where need us to teach some pupils in the school.We also will live with the villages about one month.We should go to school with them at the same time.Standing in front of blackboards,we are the teachers.We have the responsibility to teach them Chinese,math,English,science and arts.We also should tell them something happened in the city which they don't know in the countryside to widen their views.It will be a great thing if we can make friends with them. If you want take the opportunity,please don't hesitate to call us at 40088579.Our activity will end at 7th,July.