2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文章层次较为清晰；采用了一些简单的从句。

When we entry into a supermarket,numerous goods with beautiful package hit our eyes.However,most of the goods are on excessive packaging.Under the nice cover it just things we need but its price rise a lot due to its package. Businessmen produce goods with excessive in order to appeal to the customers consume opinion that concentration much on the goods package.Therefore,businessmen earn money and customers buy goods beautiful. As far as I am concerned,on excessive packaging is a waste of material absolutely.Not only does it use numerous material,but it create large numbers of rubbish.There is no doubt that save resource and environment protection are both urge for us to do.Therefore,it is remarkably necessary for us to reduce the phenomenon of excessive package.