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What Kinds of Consumers You Are? Nowadays, more and more people prefer buying clothes in sales to consuming in general prices. Is it beneficial to us from the group-by deals？Should we trust the quality of clothes in sales? It is a big problem which we should think more details about . In my personal life, I often buy clothes with my roomates on the internet, because if we buy more than two suit of clothes, the sellers will give us reasonal price or free postage. So that we can save some mony and energy to do other interesting things. If you agree with me, you are the person who likes using coupons,too. On the contory, some people would like to buying clothes in the markets, because the clothes you can try on and choose, which kinds of clothes are suitable to you . You can choose the comfortable clothes ;eventhough its prices is too expensive, the importance things to you is its comfor and quality. According to the two different kinds of consumers, we can learn something about them. All of us want to buy things in a reasonal price, it is the importance of group-by deals. But we also pay more attention to the quality about clothess, on the other side, we enjoy the phycological consuming than the physical things.
