2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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When we enter a supermarket,numerous goods with beautiful package fill our eyes.However,most of the goods are on excessive packaging.Under the nice cover it just things as ordinary one but its price rise a lot due to its package. Businessmen produce goods with excessive in order to appeal to customers consume opinion that concentration much on the goods package.Therefore,businessmen earn money and customers buy goods beautiful. As far as I am concerned,on excessive packaging is a waste of material absolutely.Not only does it use numerous material,but it create large numbers of rubbish.There is no doubt that save resource and environment protection are both urge for us to do.Therefore,it is remarkably necessary for us to reduce the phenomenon of excessive package.