题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Nowadays with the fast development of the economic more and more people depend on computers whatever they do,which cause more and more serious problems. Firstly,we can't deny,computers are very important in our daily life.On the one hand,it brings more and more convenience in our works.Also it can relax ourselves, because we can use computers play games,chat with our best friends,listen to music,watch films when we have a free time.On the other hand,everything has two coins,computers included.Today,more and more student like using computers to find their homework's answers rather than thank about how do can they achieve the answers.what's more people became like staying at their homes instate of going out,because they just only move their figuers can buy everything what they want to buy.This is the reason why people are more lazy now. In my opinion ,We should use computers in a proper way,copy answers or just play games are not allowed .we shouldn't absorb in it,because the computer world are image world.