2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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When we enter a supermarket,numerous goods with beautiful package fill our eyes.However,most of the goods are on excessive packaging.Under the nice cover it is things as ordinary as others, but its price rise a lot due to its package. Businessmen produce goods with excessive package in order to attract more buyers who concentrate much on the goods cover.Therefore,businessmen sale goods in a higher price and customers buy pretty goods. As far as I am concerned,on excessive packaging is a waste of material absolutely.Not only does it use numerous material,but it creates large numbers of rubbish.There is no doubt that save resource and environment protection are urged for us to do.Therefore,it is remarkably necessary for us to reduce the phenomenon of excessive package.