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I have a good friend.she's name sarah.She is nighty year old on this year .She is a very beautiful girl ,she have long black hair and have a like kid's voice,our all classmate call her nike name is meow,the mean is the cat's voice.Our's relationship as sister,sometime we will sharingappy and unhappy things in life .we ar