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I do not agree with those people who think buying clothes in a sale may not make us smart. on contradiction, the way buying clothes in a sale or collecting all kinds of coupons shows our students wise and ration. Now, we are just students ,we do not have so much money to buy too much expensive clothes and other expensive things. we can not use our parent`s money to buy something expensive. And then , those things that in sale not mean they are in poor qulity, if we can use few money but buy same things , why not? Collecting all kinds of coupons also can help us save money, then we can buy much more things. Last, why do you think expensive things represent smart, who can use money wiser ,he is smart. everyone want to use little much money to buy good things, does not? so I can not agree with such opinion, now we do not have such ability to buy some expensive things.
