题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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We live in a colorful world , we all have common faith . but we should have on maintaining trust , just contain this situation . Trust is so important in our life . such as in parter , in friends and so on. Especially in couples , because couples is based on the trust each other . trust can make our life filled lively , more trust , more peace , more happiness. If we always doubt something and have so manny trustness , so we will argue with our friends , and he or she will so angry . More seriously , you wii lose your friends. According to the analyze , we should study to trust others. If life lost the trust , our life will become uncolorful.