2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。

More and more people are liking to travel to some cities during these 10 years.And this phenomenon will be increased in the future,traveling to a city to spend our holidays will become a popular thing.Especially for nowadays' workers who are always working and don't have time to relax themselves,then traveling to some place will be the best way for them. First,the reason why so many people are traveling in a city because they want to change their environment to have a fresh air and relax time.Second,going to other cities will give us some new thinking about our life and future,and we can meditate our future life during the time when we are on the buses,trains or planes.And the third,it is the time we get together with our families,which will increase the relation between children and parents,what is more important to us than work. Even though traveling is a good way to relax,it is still has some bad parts.Because so many people are traveling to one place in the same time,then the traffic will be very crowded.And it will let the staffs who worked for the feature spots very tired,it will be a way to damage the feature spots.