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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:2000
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

More and more people are like to travel to some cities during these 10 years.And this appearance will be increased in the future,traveling to a city to spend our holidays will become a popular thing.Especially nowadays' workers who are always working and don't have time to relax themselves,then traveling to some place will be the best way for them. First,the reason why so many people are traveling in a city because they want to change their environment to have a fresh air and relax time.Second,going to other cities will give us some new thinking about our life and future,and we can meditate our future during the time when we are on the buses,trains or planes.And the third,it is the time we get together with our families,which will increase the relation between children and parents,what is more important to us than work. Even though traveling is a good way to relax,it is still has some bad parts.Because so many people are traveling to one place in the same time,then the traffic will be very busy.And it will let the staffs who worked for the tourist destination very tired,it will be a way to damage the tourist destination.

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