2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多。

More and more people like to travel to some cities during these 10 years.And this appearance will be increased in the future,traveling to a city to spend our holidays will become a popular thing.Especially nowadays workers who always work and don't have time to relax themselves,so it is a good chance to whom traveling some places will be the best way for them. First,the reason why so many people are traveling in a city because they want to change their environment to have a fresh air and relax time.Second,going to other cities will give us some new thinking about our life and future,and we can meditate during the time when we are on the buses,trains or planes.And the third,it is the time we get together with our families,which will increase the relation between children and parents,what is more important to us than work. Even though traveling is a good way to relax,it is still has some dreadful parts.Because so many people are traveling to one place in the same time,then the traffic will be very busy.And it will let the staffs who worked for the tourist destination very tired,it will be a way to damage the place where we are visiting.