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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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Nowadays with the rapidly development of advanced science,more and more computers are commonly and widely used in everyday life.The popularity of digital computers will have a great influence on our work ,study and everyday life.Firstly, plenty of people study online which provides a varity of lessons online because it's more convenient and cheaper .Sencondly computers provides a lot of softwares which helps people finish their work easily.What's more,computers make our life more enjoyable ,that is to say,computers can add color to dull routine of everyday life. It's accepted that computers play s significan part ,and what's more,a lot of attentions being drawn to the charge of computers.However,whether computers deserves such an attention , people’s ideas vary.Some people are afriad tha the human being will rely on the computers excessively so that they will loss their ability of writing. For my personal prespective,computers just like a double-edged sword.With them we may have less trouble dealing with problems in our life and enjoy a better-off life.Howere,one points should be kept in mind that we should make the sensible use of them,always being the master of them.

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