小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My dog is dudu,it's very fat,but I like because of it give me more safetied when I meet dangerous.Dudu is 9 years now.It a litter small dag when it came to my home.We all like it and it is a member for us.It very nosey in outside or in inside.