2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the rapid development of technology, computer is essential to our lives. We can use it to work,study,shop and so on. However, computer is a sword with two blades. Nowadays, internet is a necessary part of man. Some people make it to search information which is useful from all over the world. Certainly, it is most efficient way to collect information. Some do shopping online. So we need not to go out, it wastes our time and energy. What's more ,we can try computer to have fun, such as chatting,watching movie, listening music and playing games. However,it sometimes makes man addict to it. It leads to no work, no study and even let man away from society. What is a horrible thing! On conclusion, computer makes a large impact on man. We need resist temptation and maintain a balance between its advantages and disadvantages.