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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3007
要求:
题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
评语:

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

everyone want to get succeed in the high speed of developing in our current society. Different persion has different defination of success.For example,Someone consider that he have been success if he can afford a house;others think that they get succeed if they can enter the university.Inasmuch as some persion have their goals,they have get succeed if their goals come ture. Just now as we all know that the knowledge is becoming more and more important,thus having more knowledge is one way of success. Of course,it is just in my opinion.There are more ways to success. All in all,if only we can do our best to do one thing,we will get succeed in the end.

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