2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education is vital for students. As the diagram shows, people's earnings are mostly in base of the degree they have gotten. It is obvious that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. If a person has obtained a Doctor degree, he is more likely to be employed and earn 1551 dollars per week. While a person who even failed the high school diploma has bigger chance to be out of work or earn little money of 451 dollars per week. Many people would say that diplomas are not the equivalent of abilities. It is true but the fact is the higher degree you have gotten, the more money you will get.The higher earnings and lower unemployment rates are what education pays in.