题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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As we all known, in recent decades computer is playing an important role in our daily life. we are now in a digital times. You couldn't think how our work is going on if there is not a computer. Of course, computer gives us so much conveniences in almost kinds of aspects.However, it also gives us so many disadvantages. There are several reasons to account for the advantages which computer gives us.First of all, we could learn all kinds of knowledge which you want to learn with the computer on the internet, such as reading a seller book, chatting with an old friend,listening music and so on,that's very cool! second, we are very busy now, we don't have time to buy something in real shop or supermarket.Don't worry, you could do these things with the computer. Whereas computer also give us some disadvantages. As an old saying goes, every coin has two sides.Firstly when we chat with friend on the net, we don't have the feeling as we are face-to-face. What's more, some students play games with the computer .It's a horrible thing that they are addicted in it . So in my opinion, we shouldn't spend so much time on the internet.A real word is also need us!