2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

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Dear President, I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my appreciation for your hospitality accorded to me my delegation during our visit to your center. During the entire visit,my delegation and I were overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by you and your business representatives.I sincerely hope that we could have more exchanges like this one so that we could be able to further our discussion to explore the feasible ways expand our cooperation. I am looking forward to your early visit to our center,when I will be able to pay back the hospitality that we received. With kind personal regards. Yours faithfully, Li Ming