2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Strong will is playing an important role in our life.Even it is the most important to succeed.IF we want to succeed,we must have to stuggle all the way up.As the saying goes,rome is not built in a day,so we should have the courage and determination. the man who has the strong will can achieve the great mission.Just as the same to the students,if we don't work hard,we will not succeed.Besides,only in this way can we really achieve our goal in the end. Life can be hard,but if we have the courage and strong will,we will finally get the sunshine we want.