2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中用词稍显贫乏；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

Strong will is playing an important role in our life,such as it can lead us to succeed.Firstly,if we want to succeed,we must have to struggle all the way up.Secendly,as the saying goes,rome is not built in a day,so we should have the courage and determination. The man who has the strong will can achieve the great mission.Just as the same to the students,if we don't work hard,we will not succeed.Besides,only in this way can we really achieve our goal. Life can be hard,but if we have the courage and strong will,we will finally get the sunshine we want.