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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中学术词汇表达比较恰当,但单词拼写不够认真;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Education Pays According to the survey of eduation pays, we draw a conclusion that the higher education is not sure the same as the higher pays. In some areas, the higher education is stand for higher pays. And higher education will bring more opportunites to you . Such as school, company and academic areas etc. Therefore, many people are trying their best to aquire the knowledge. In order to get the higher education, they devoted themselves to examinations. However, in other areas, the professional skill is more important than the higher education. With the development of economics, society need moer and more professional person. On the contrary, society provide positions to the highly educated workers is limited. From my point of view, we should according to the development of the society and our own development to choose the way that we are going to be. Remember, don't pursue the higher education blindly.

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