2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒。

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above table,if we look hard enough,we can observe tangibly that it describes certain differences concerning the degree of satisfaction which three age groups hold in a given corporation.The percentage of folks under 40,between 41 and 50 and above 50 who hold content emotion with their jobs is 16.7%,0.0% and 40% respectively,while the discontent feeling of the three groups is 33.3%,64% and 10% respectively.It is apparent that the satisfaction degree of the different age groups vary significantly. What accounts for the not uncommon?Small wonder,from my perspective,perhaps we have no better way to appreciate it than by studying the three influential factors.In the first place,the difference is closely related to the unequal income that they gain from their work.In the second place,in the final analysis,the difference has a lot to do with their different attitude towards and outlook on life and work.In the third place,we have unquestionable evidence that the treatments that they received and the policies of the company may also give rise to staff's difference in the satisfaction degree. I would not go that far correspondingly,we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that it is as the society further develops that the difference is bound to exist in the forthcoming years.As far as I am concerned,it is a negative phenomenon and should be eliminated in that only in this way,can it not merely disadvantageous to individuals but also to the stability of a company and even the whole society,be you a great man or an ordinary man.