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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;全文结构较为严谨;能够使用一些简单的从句。

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In this day and age,computer play a significant role in our life,we can solve various problems through the computer.But there is a phenomenon that nobody could have failed notice it -- men maybe think like the computer.It has become a graves problem in this society. Apprarently enough,there are some negative impacts which we should not ignore.To begin with,people think more and more like the computer,this phenomenon may hurt the ability of people solve problems.Moreover,it produces bad impact on individuals like the computer brain.Because we think more like computer lead to we don't use our brain think about things,however use the thinking like computer to think about problems.Finally,if people face choice,they may chose the method that think comes from computer,not human's. On the one hand,it is essenital that people shouldn't extremely rely on computer,we can ue it solve problems,but not all.On the other hand,it is suggersted that individuals should enhance their awareness of the fact that computer is made by men.Only by adopting these measures, can we expect to stop this trade.

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