拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
A survey,carried out by Beijing,showed that 67 percent of students hold the view that saving money is a good habit and the others firmly think that using tomorrow's money today is better.From my point of view,I am in favor of the previous opinion.The reasons are as follows. Firstly,we students have no jobs or other means to make money and as a result of this,we had to turn to our parents.In no case should we waste our parents' money.Secondly,It is a virtue for Chinese to save ,as well as a good habit we should have.We must develop good habits since we are young and that is just what makes us confident to say we are Chinese.Lastly,maybe we can earn much money later,but no one can predict the future.If you run out of the majority of your money today,you will have to worry whether you have enough money to live through tomorrow.It is quite unnecessary and unwise to do like this. To sum up,we should develop the habit of saving money and it is not feasible to use tomorrow's money today.