2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

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A smile is not only a body language but also a show of your feelings. In the life of a fast pace, learning to smile is quite important. There are lots of benifits of learning to smile. For example, it can encourage others, also it can encourage yourself. Learn to smile when you face the difficulties. It gives you the courage to go straight the road you choose and the courage to face life. In a word, learning to smile is important in our daily life.