2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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What do you think about on online shopping?Have you ever attend on online shopping.Do you like it?As we all know that on online shopping is very hot now and especially for young people.There is no doubt that it is useful for us,which make our life more converation and so on.But on the other hand that it also has a lot of problem,which makes our in trouble.So there is some advice that will profile for you. The first thing that you need makes on online shopping in control and don't buy something of you don't really need it.Then you need to make a good attitude about on online shopping,which is quite important for us.Finally of the foremost that do yourself! Don't do something that other people do.