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2005年12月英语六级作文真题:Declining a job offer

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:30浏览次数:1169
要求:
Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1.对公司提供职位表示感谢 
2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因 
3.希望予以谅解,并表达对公司的良好祝愿. 
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;熟练使用了一些长难句;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请注意分段。

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I am so appreciated you giving me a job offer,and the job you give to me is very good,which I don't know how to express my feeling about it.Any way,I just should thank you very much that you can offer me the job.But I shouldn't take it,the reason why are: First,I have my own job now.I think i should do my job faithfully,and I shouldn't abandoned my company during this period.Second,even though I lose my job now,and I should take it neither,because I don't have the capability to competent for the job,I think I should have more experience to competent for it.And the third,if I take the job you offered,then I won't have time to accompany my families.And in my opinion,my families are more important than work.So if there is a choose from families and work,I will choose families,what is the precious in my life. As I explained,I hope you can forgive me to reject it,and I am very appreciated it that you give this opportunity to me.And I will give my best wishes to you,and I hope we will be a partner in the future.

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