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I am so appreciated you giving me a job offer,and the job you give to me is very good,which I don't know how to express my feeling about it.Any way,I just should thank you very much that you can offer me the job.But I shouldn't take it,the reason why are: First,I have my own job now.I think i should do my job faithfully,and I shouldn't abandoned my company during this period.Second,even though I lose my job now,and I should take it neither,because I don't have the capability to competent for the job,I think I should have more experience to competent for it.And the third,if I take the job you offered,then I won't have time to accompany my families.And in my opinion,my families are more important than work.So if there is a choose from families and work,I will choose families,what is the precious in my life. As I explained,I hope you can forgive me to reject it,and I am very appreciated it that you give this opportunity to me.And I will give my best wishes to you,and I hope we will be a partner in the future.
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