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I am so appreciate that you offer me the job,and the job you give to me is very good,which I don't know how to express my feeling about it.Any way,I just should thank you very much that you can offer me the job.But I shouldn't take it.The reason why are: First,I have my own job now.I think I should do my job faithfully,and I shouldn't abandoned my company during this period.Second,even though I lose my job now,and I should take it neither,because I don't have the capability to competent for the job,I think I should have more experience to competent for it.And the third,if I take the job you offer,then I won't have time to accompany my families.And in my opinion,my families are more important than work.So if there is choose from families and works,I will choose families,what is the precious in my life. As above,I hope you can forgive me to reject it,and I am very appreciate it that you give this opportunity to me.And I will give my best wishes to you,and I hope we will be a partner in the future.
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