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2005年12月英语六级作文真题:Declining a job offer

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:30浏览次数:1169
要求:
Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1.对公司提供职位表示感谢 
2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因 
3.希望予以谅解,并表达对公司的良好祝愿. 
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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

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I am so appreciate that you offer me the job,and the job you give to me is very good,which I don't know how to express my feeling about it.Any way,I just should thank you very much that you can offer me the job.But I shouldn't take it.The reason why are: First,I have my own job now.I think I should do my job faithfully,and I shouldn't abandoned my company during this period.Second,even though I lose my job now,and I should take it neither,because I don't have the capability to competent for the job,I think I should have more experience to competent for it.And the third,if I take the job you offer,then I won't have time to accompany my families.And in my opinion,my families are more important than work.So if there is choose from families and works,I will choose families,what is the precious in my life. As above,I hope you can forgive me to reject it,and I am very appreciate it that you give this opportunity to me.And I will give my best wishes to you,and I hope we will be a partner in the future.

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