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A smile is not only a body language but also a show of your emotions.Learning to smile is pretty essential. There are lots of benefits to learning to smile. For example, it can inspire others, also it can stimulate yourself. Learn to smile when you confront the difficulties. It gives you the courage to go straight the road you select and the courage to face life. In a word, learning to smile is important in our daily life.