2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中用词稍显贫乏；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；请注意分段。

computer and man with the rapid development of science technology and improvement of life style ,more and more people has personal computer .this is common sense ,we can use computer do lots of things,such as shopping ,chat ,watch movie ,and study,far more.lots of boy like play computer games ,while girls love shopping .