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Recently the problem that university campus being open to tourists has been brought into focus.The famous universities have been the new visiting spots that tourists from everywhere can go to visit the campus without permission. Whether the campus should open to tourists,people have different views.Some of them think campus should open to tourists,because when students visiting the famous campus,it will motivate them to study hard to go to the university they look forward to.And it will accelerate the economics of travelling due to the mysterious of the famous university. The others claim that the opposite is true.If there is no limited for people to visit the campus,it will disturb students having a class when tourists talk loudly outside the classroom.It will also lead to a mess in the campus,we couldn't exclude some people will throw out their rubbish when they are visiting. Both views have their right parts,nevertheless in my opinion,famous campus is a good place for our tourists to visit,but we should limit the amount of people and the visiting hours.It is a good to visit during the vacation.