Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education Pays As the charts demonstrate to us that doctoral degree and professional degree earn more money than other degrees in general. It means that the money you earn is relative with the degree you have which the education pays.So what attitude should be held by us?As an old saying goes:You receive what you grow.Maybe it representative a big budget as for the education pays.However from the long run it will bring about a satisfi result and exert a good influence on our minds and behaviors. In my opinion,the education pays ought to be invested properly so that the results can be appeared with our expectation.