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After college entance examination,i shoul have a good rest and enjou mysely.On the during of activity,maybe i will read some book about enjoyable book.An i will accompish my parents owing to they are do for us much so e should repay them.Meanwhile i will attend socialactivity to full my lifeand accomplsh my social value to help who are in need of people.I couldn,t wait to come to my vacation.In the end i willl do my best to prepare for the exam to repay my respect techers and parents.