2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Recently,the problem of computer and man has arouse wide concern among the public. some maintain that the computer is benical to man.Firesty,because of the computer ,the man can make friends by the computer,Seconcaodly,man do their entain on the computer,Last but not least,man can communicate with each other through computer. However,quite a few people the opposite opinon that the computer's arouse is detrimental to man.For one thing,it make many man paly computer game,for another due to a long time on computer do a harmful to man's healthy. To my way of thinking ,every coin have two sides,we should treat things rationally.In the first place,we should make good use of the computer ,in the second place,we also avoid something harmful things of computer Given all the factors i have outlined ,I strongly commit to the motion that we should treat the problem that the computer and man rationally