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I agree with the statement that car have the greater effects on society than airplanes.With the increasing number of building of highway,and having enough money to buy cars for our ordinary people,we prefer to choose cars as the transport instruments for our daily life. It's so convenient that help people a lot.Whenever you go out for a long trip or just for a short distance,it's always comfortable to drive a car,and having choice on whether drive youself is one of the exciting point.Of couse,you must have been verified you can do it .Comparing with car,airplane is too giant, too expensive,considerating all kinds of reason that people simply choose it for a long distance or something in urgency.There is no one who take an airplane twice or three times in one day,but it can not be more common for taking a car. The car have a gerater effects on society than airplane result from its more likely to be use.
