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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication The internet has become part of the human's lives today.We do variety things on it, including writing dairy and chatting, which are making the deep impact on interpersonal communication. We can know how our friends who live far away form us are going on through their blogs or online dairies.
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