2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,many parents always do every thing for their children and don't let they do any thing that even a easy thing .This fact has made many children without enougt ability to do their thing so that they must ask for help to their parents or others.The pheference has heavy bad effect for soial .So wo should take measure to solve the problem and stop its harm for children.For making children learned do evey thing by theirselves,as their parents ,should let them do some easy thing at home ,such as wash saucer and clern the room,buy some drinks from the shopping.Thought these thing are some easy thing,but it can children get used to do evey things that it is very easy.A word is do a difficult thing from a easy thing as beginning.So let children do thing and they had been it a habit.If they can do every thing by themselves before ask others for help,and prove that the children had been independent.